When i showed my teacher Mrs Howlett my first draft, she said that there was to much text for the main cover story a friend in my media class suggested i put 'All you need to know about JOE' i liked this idea as it was simple but catchy so people would want to find out more. I also hadn't mentioned who the main cover picture was of so by changing the main cover story i think this has helped the image and the story stand out a lot more.
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